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"(Name)!" Tony shouted as he ran across the street. You had been fighting alongside him during the great battle between Loki. Tony of course had flown off to bring the party back to them but never did he think that something like this could happen. During the battle, you tried to stab a Chitauri with your knife only to have the alien grab it and stab you with it. You underestimated the alien's power and Tony had failed you.

He should have stuck by your side the entire time to protect you.

But he wasn't.

Now...

"(Name), please wake up," Tony cried as he shook your body that was becoming lifeless. Your eyelids felt heavy and were threatening to close any minute. If only there was a hospital nearby. Even then, would the doctors be able to save your life? He gripped your hand tightly and tried to stay strong for the both of you. "Just hang in there (Name). Everything is  going to be alright."

"Tony..." You whispered. You were starting to lose the strength to just talk now. He leaned in so that he could hear you better. With a faint smile you said, "Thank you...for being my friend....I love you."

And just like that, all the life that was in your body was gone. 

"(NAME)!" Tony cried when he saw you die in his arms. "NOO! (NAME)! DON'T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS! PLEASE! (NAME)! (NA)-!"


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"(NAME)!" Tony screamed as he jolted awake in bed. 

It had been a nightmare but not just any nightmare. A horrible nightmare of a memory he would rather forget. It had happened so long ago but he was still not over it. Tony missed you till this day. He wished desperately that you could be around today. He missed your smile, your laughter, the way your face scrunches up when you get mad....everything. He missed every detail about you. But you were gone....somewhere where he couldn't reach you so easily. 

He put his hands over his now sweaty face, letting a small sob escape his lips. The sheets were stuck to his body due to the sweat so he pushed them off of him roughly. He got out of bed, the desire to sleep now gone. He couldn't nor he wouldn't if all the dreams he had involved you in someway. It was cruel that his own mind was doing this to him. 

    Tony made his way down to the lab. Hopefully there he would be able to get his mind off of somethings. He sat down on a lab stool and just stared at the little tools that were in front of him. He picked one up and put it down and then picked it up again. This kept happening until he subconsciously started to do something. He had had an idea a long time ago. An idea that he knew wasn't morally right but he at least had to try. His hands started moving like they had a mind of their own. He picked up several tools, parts, and even pieces from his old Iron Man suits and started to get to work. 

All that could be heard in the lab was metal and several other pieces clinking against each other. At this point he didn't care anymore. He just wanted to see you one last time; he wanted to be in your presence just one last time. Perhaps then he could get some closure. 

     When he was finished with his work, he sat down and couldn't believe what he had created. Everything was even greater than what he had imagined in his head. His hand shakily went over to a remote that he had made to go along with the machine and pressed the on button. The machine seemed to have come to life with a breath and moved slowly as it's system made sure that everything was in check. 

"Um....hello there," Tony said uneasily when the machine's eyes landed on him. Eyes that he had looked into so many times before. 

"Hello there Master Stark," The machine greeted. Even it's voice sounded exactly like....yours. 

"There's no need to be so formal," Tony laughed nervously. He licked his lips before saying, "Tony would be just fine."

The machine blinked and registered this new piece of information in it's-no, her head. "Alright. Tony it is then. May I ask, what is my name?"

"Your name...." Tony trailed off. He gulped thinking, is this really safe? Should he be messing with things like this? He shook his head, thinking that it was best to not think at all. "Your name is, (Name)."

"(Name)," The name glided off of her tongue with ease. She then smiled for the first time. "It's nice to meet you Tony. What are my first orders?"

He thought about a number of things he could do with you. He remembered all the things you used to love to do before the battle of New York. His face turned sour for a moment of course the machine realized. She got off from the chair she was sitting on and approached him slowly. Tony looked up at her surprised when she was just inches away from him. 

Something looked different about her. Her (e/c) eyes didn't have that glazed look that it did before. It held....actual emotion in them. 

"Tony," She smiled. "How about we go play with Steve's shield?"

How she even knew that you used to love to do that or how she even knew who Steve was, never crossed his mind. 

He merely grinned and said, "I'd loved to, (Name)."

So what do you guys think of this? I started a new Tony story well just because. This was one started off of as tragic right from the start but don't worry, this one will actually have a surprise ending. So please, keep on reading :)

Let me know what you guys think below in the comments!

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Bananagirl360 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
Your getting this from Astro boy aren't you? Doesn't matter I LOVE IT!!!Exited 
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well no but thank you anyways! :D
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014

 

 

kyaa~

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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
nyaaa~
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
lol ya
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Daaaaaaaaw! I'm a robot! Cool!
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sort of, yes XD
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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portsha Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
hurry with more pleze!!!!
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:iconphoenixangel7:
PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll type as fast as I can!
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portsha Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
thanks
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xXDanielPhantomXx Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthoranotherplz:
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
SOON!
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iloveshadow4ever1 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mah :iconfeelsplz:!!!!... This was really good! I loved it :3
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay man, next part will be up soon, thanks! :iconslowhugplz:
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mewmewgirl123 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...what a pile of feels this was.....I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I can't wait for part 2, you brilliant person, :giggle:
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So many feels and thank you! :iconbrohugplz:
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mewmewgirl123 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!! :iconletmehugyouplz:
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haileyanimefreak Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, gosh. This is reminding me of something, I just can't remember what.
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well if it helps, this was inspired by the a song called 'Make Me Real' by she. 
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haileyanimefreak Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No,not helping.
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:iconphoenixangel7:
PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Have you seen the anime Chobits?
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haileyanimefreak Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG!!!! That's it that's exactly what I was thinking of! Yay! :)
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
There we go~!
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haileyanimefreak Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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shields-and-stripes Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness! I'm not usually one to go for a Tony story, but this was great! I loved the first scene. Awesome job on the angst! thumbs up emote 
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<------Is obviously a Steve girl XD 

I'm glad you liked this story and I figured the billionaire needed a story that showed some other emotions since lots of people keep writing him as a sarcastic goof ball. 
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shields-and-stripes Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<------- I'm right there with you. Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 

Well, you certainly widened his emotional spectrum. Great job! Keep up the great writing. Your stories are always phenomenal! 
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! I'm glad you're satisfied with what I write :D
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YOpancakelovers Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
The beginning! Poor Tony!! I think I'm crying XD Can't wait for the next part!! 
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do not cry, next part will be up soon :)
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YOpancakelovers Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
Love :happybounce:  Yay!!
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Megeeky Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
The feels! :iconcryingrageguyplz: Please do continue, I'm looking foward to the next part.
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So many feels will come. Thanks :)
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Megeeky Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
At this part, You underestimated the alien's power and Tony had failed you.  I bursted into my kitchen and yelled, "You underestimate my power!"
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Now I must ask, is your kitten alright? XD
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Megeeky Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
You're welcome!
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MajesticReaper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I screamed ;;
Tony bby ;;

I cant wait for more, this is already beautiful. ;;
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it so much! >w< 
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MajesticReaper Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eeeee no prob hon.. ;w;
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JaneWeller Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You've scared me and I was about to cry at the end of this part until I read the description. This story screams for super happy ending! :love:
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry for scaring you but oh yes, this will have an ending that hopefully everyone will love ;3
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JaneWeller Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So good to know that! :D
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RecklessAlbinoChibi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014

Aww--

I just--

This is fabulous [well, all of your works are fabulous, but you know XD].


I can't wait for part 2!

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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this and the rest of my work.

Part 2 should be out soon~!
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queen-of-olympus Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student General Artist
I felt bad for Tony. But this was so sweet!
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, poor billionaire. Thanks dearie!
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queen-of-olympus Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student General Artist
#MoneyCantBuyHappiness #But #ItIsMoreFunToCryInASportsCar #ThanToCryOnABike
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PhoenixAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
#I'dRatherCryInASpeedBoatWhileEatingCheesecake
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queen-of-olympus Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Student General Artist
#SteveIsAVirginButNotAfterTheReaderCameIntoHisLife
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